Writing Dialogue

"Finally," sighed Dad, "they are gone."
"I thought they would never leave!" replied Mom.
"First day of school is always a challenge."
Mom stated, "Our kids are getting older every year."
"Soon they will be graduated and moving out." responded Dad.
"I'm more scared for them," cried out Mom, "then I am scared for myself."
Dad suggested, "At least they are very independent, and we can trust them."
"Of course, I trust them with my life."

Strobe

The mesmerizing lights flashing in a sequenced effect throughout the cluster of bodies.

Screams and yells drown against the walls.

Heartbeats are racing.

Anticipation is evidently in the air.

Hands are rising in synchronous motion.

Heads nodding, while various feet are jumping to the beat.

“Click” the DJ drops the song.

And the process repeats.

A Change in Time.

If I, Tim Lee had the technology or the power to be able to travel back in time I would perhaps have to say that this moment right now, as we speak would be the cause to world destruction, and that's why I would have to change it. Many of you may not know this, but our beloved Mr. Van Camp, a very nice guy as we all know has deceived all ten of the students in his English 11 class. With all ten ideas that we had posted on our very own blogs Mr. Van Camp had secretly written and stored these ideas into his very own time machine. Little did we know that our English teacher spent all his free time building the "Worlds First Time Machine". The time machine was sleek and innovated ,more than anyone could of expected. The wires were florescent as the sun and you could see your reflection for miles. With this new piece of technology Mr. Van Camp took our ideas and used them to his benefits. The first time Mr. Van Camp was very hesitant, but as he traveled more and more he became very familiar with all the controls. As Ben parker from spider man would say "With great power comes great responsibility." As great advice as this was Mr. Van Camp was ultimately bloodthirsty for power. He took all of our ideas and changed the worlds most historic events in one whole day. By doing this Mr. Van Camp became famous for all of his heroic deeds that he did not give his students credit for. I guess karma had a soft side because Mr. Van Camp did not have anything bad happen to him, in fact as strange as this sounds people were treating him as a god and believe it or not I think I saw his hair ever slowly growing  back.